Thursday, September 29, 2011

Photo Description





Using the FOUR strategies you learned for "description," describe this photo in 6+ sentences.


  1. Use Adjectives/Adverbs

  2. Be Specific

  3. Use your FIVE senses

  4. Use Figurative Language (simile/metaphor/personification/IRONY)

Good luck, and GO HAWKS!!!

24 comments:

not mr. smith said...

mr. smith is the bestest

Christina feliciano said...

In this picture I see a enormous field with lime green grass and huge letters saying iowa hawk eyes. The picture has wavy flags that can create a tornado. the picture has strong looking football players lined up and I see a crowd of different rase. I also see the words are in black and yellow. From.... Your best student Chrissy!!!!!!

dominiqueb said...

this photo contains a wide football field filled with thousands of people,some on the field in fb gear others holding flags that's yellow but big bold black letters spelling iowa & @ the back there is a nike's sign that also in yellow & black

lamon phillips said...

the is bis as a giant. this crowd reminds me a steelers game.i can almost feel the vibrations from the seats. i can see a enourmous colorful crowd. this stadium isw a full as the northwestern stadium!!!! this is a very interesting post.

P.S GO WILDCATS!!

Mardellw. said...

This picture is a very bright colored picture,the flags are as bright as the sun.I believe if you touch those flags your fingers will sizzle because this team is a "hot" team.

kyra.h said...

there is a iowa marching band on a football field with the colors gold,white and,black.and they are poforming in font of a huge crowd screming IOWA!!!IOWA!!!IOWA!!!and chanting the name of the team wich whom they want to win the game.but i think it will be IOWA because they got this big iowa letters in the middle of the filed and there black and gold.

K-Ra said...

This photo looks like a band or a flag group taking the crowd over my their amazement on the field. They seem to be marching in an orderlly fashion. You can clearly see the crowd going bonkers. IOWA is spelled out acroos the field as if they are having fun in public. You know what I'm talking about. Any way, around the edges of this photo you can see that its fading out into black. To the left and to the right. In the top right corner you can see whee the players or cheerleaders might've came from. The grass on the field is a patchy green. Light green on this side and a darker shade of green in the next.

Kathy*D* said...

In the photo, there are 4,big, separate yellow flags with capital letters spelling out IOWA going from left to right. The I is a bit farther from the others.There are straight rows of people (I think they're the football players) standing on the edges of the dark and light green, white striped patterned football field. Also, there are huge crowds of people in the stadium surrounding the football field. There is one person carrying each flag with either the capital letter I, O, W, or A, seemingly running to the left with the flags flapping in the wind. In the background with an entrance, or exit, there is a Nike symbol on the upper left corner of the opening.

gracej said...

The hawkeyes are really taking this game seriously. All you see is team spirit out here. Confetti fills the air like a bunch of yellow and black insects chasing their prey. The band is blasting music as the cheerleaders encourage their team. Everyone is helping out for this homecoming game especially the staff with the concessions. They're going to make alot of money judging by the smell of rich hotdogs and fresh buns, Oh and the long line thats tailed around the corner like python snake.1/6 of the stadium is occupied by the opposing team's colors which has nothing on the support and encouragement of the Iowa Hawkeyes to win this game.

Tanzania Warren said...

IT's colorful.i can tell that a football game is happening. It looks like a team is celebrating there victory.A band lokks like it is passing through.There are alot of fans . they all look as if ther enjoyed the game.They're team color is white and gold
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randyporter said...

from this picture i can see that this croud is fired up with there hotdogs hot enough to smell from anywhere and so crouded everyone have to be touching one another also they got there band and there girls to keep this croud hypert, and they got iowa and big letters and bright yellow like a bee and dont have to listen to this on b.e.t becauses you hear it from your home.

chanceztranesemoniquesims said...

this picture shows bright yellow and black visions . the mood out there look happy and cheerful full of team pride and supporting crowds . thats celebrating that the hawks won the football game . and the parade looks all group couporating with joyfall souls of the winning . the crowds look as thy is happy and look as if they are loud from as far as the cheering part.and the smell i bet for the football team is full of victory . and the team and crowd for the other team can taste they were defeated by the hawks team !

LASHONDA HOOKS said...

I SEE BIG LETTERS THAT SAY IOWA. THE LETTERS ARE YELLOW AND BLACK. I CAN SEE THAT THEIR IS A BAND THAT IS PERFORMING, THEY HAVE ON WHITE, YELLOW, AND BLACK ON THEIR UNIFORMS AND THEIR ARE MANY FANS THEIR ENJOYING THE GAME.

khaliya payton said...

Their is a state that is called the IOWA state.I have been
to the iowa state before for my family renion.I have also touched a iowa bird...It's like a really long long looking like a corndog kind of thing.My father went well also have heared the iowa stadium bfore.I am really not a iowa fan but mi teacher and my father is.

Tatyana M. said...

This Picture Is Shown On A Big Football Field With Lots Of Football Players With Gear That Is White And Gold.Their's Lots Of People Sitting And Cheering for the teams victory who won there is a marching ban also celebrating.People Are Holding Up Flags That Are Black And Yellow That Says LOWA.

mr. yarbrough said...

In this picture I see a enormous field with lime green grass and huge letters saying iowa.The picture has wavy flags that can create a tornado.the picture has a crowd full of people of different sizes different shapes and different colorsand last but not least i see the words are in black and yellow.

Andrew Davenport said...

It's a noisy with a side of cheering and excited crowd.It looks like a football game is about 2 start.It smells like juicy hot dogs.I hear the estatic crowd.I taste sweaty socks.I feel the vibration in the crowds voices.

aallayahthomasgetmoney! said...

this photo show's an extatic crowd yelling for the hawks to win and supporting them with there team spirit and green,yellow bodies.

staci scates said...

there is a huge crowd for starters. too many people to count. You can tell that's is a black hawk's game because of the crowd. also i can just taste the bitter taste of defect for the team thats playind the black hawks. i can tell buy how the band "sounds". i can just feel the metal benches while im just celebrating the hawks victory.

Takeya T. said...

the marching band played.
The crowed watched.
they lifted flags in appreciation to the iowa hawks.
The feild was more than five yards long.
the field held more than 2,000 people.
there was alot of people rooting for the hawks.
people gathered enthusiastically.

Janel phillips said...

I think the author made the choice to make the girl all eleven because she is growning up.i said it don't matter what age you is because you still cry nd act like the age you was before you got the age you are now.
Janel Phillips

Kaylee said...

This Picture Shows A HUGE FootBall Feild That Contains Many People Cheering And Also Playin' In The Game And It Looks Like a Band... When I Look At This Picture I Think Of A College FootBall Team I See People Holding Golden Flags That Have The Letters On It That Spell out The Word Iowa.

dorisaneal said...

the football feild is with a lot of people in it got iowa on it people is sitting down big bands playing im thinking the playoffs because everyone is there like something thats bigggg i see people in the crowd eating... i see people standing look like there saying things really look like a big event thats is going on no football players so im gueesssing its half time.

Damien Boyd said...

I SEE THE BEST COLLEGE FOOTBALL TEAM EVER[THANK YOU MR SMITH} THEY ARE GETTING READY FOR THE GAME.I RECONIZE THIS PICTURE FROM MY NCAA 12 FOOTBALL GAME ON MY XBOX 360.THIS PICTURE IS TAKEN PLACE IN THE KINICK STADIUM.THE IOWA HAWKEYES ARE GETTING READY TO PLAY A IMPORTANT GAME AGAINST A REALY TOUGH TEAM. THERE IS A FULL HOUSE WITH MANY PEOPLE SRUGGLING TO FIND THEIR SEATS. THERE ARE PLENTY OF PEOPLE SELLING CONSESSIONS.I SEE 4 BANNERS IN ORDER SPELLINS IOWA. ISEE THE IOWA UNIVERSITY BAND NEATLY LINE UP AROUND YHE FEILD. I ALSO SEE A DRUM MAJORS THAT LOOK LIKE THEY ARE ABOUT LEAD THE BAND ON THE FIELD. LETS GO HAWKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!